Can anyone help with ideas for my story?

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It's actually something I started writing a couple years ago, but now with some free time on my hands I'd like to finish up. My primary inspiration is Cheerleader Picture, (ninja turtle if you're reading this reply and I'll buy you a beer.) Other great inspirations are thumb and lorddare.

It deals with meeting a girl in college who has issues, and turning her into a slut. It's told in the first person, and is M/f style. I do want to keep it realistic/plausible. The story so far is about 13-17 pages depending on the font (just like college, ha ha ha) but I was hoping for some feedback, ideas for direction or where to lead it.

I don't know how comfortable I am posting my email address, but if you could post your age/sex and an email address, I'd be happy to mail it off.