But thumb was not the original aurther of the first chapter. I first came across the orignal on a lesbien story site in the mid to late nighties. Notice the differnt writing style to the rest of the story and how the shopping items that Mary buys in the supermarket are forgotten about when thumb takes over.

I really enjoyed where Thumb takes the story but I do feel sorry for Tiger who was seemingly took a lot of flack back in the day for doing essentially the same thing as thumb did.