Welcome to Level 4
It's been taken over by a mad man!
Run you fools, Run!!
Welcome to Level 4
It's been taken over by a mad man!
Run you fools, Run!!
Last edited by Mad Lews; 02-22-2007 at 05:56 AM.
Welcome to level 4,
the Master level.
Here we separate the pain sluts from the plain sluts.
Yup I’ve always wanted to use that line and you’ll get extra points if you work it into your masterpiece.
You’ve made it past Dragon's muse, Aussiegirl1, and Ruby. No small feat and your epic journey is nearly complete, so while curiosity is a trait to be cultivated with caution I will indulge you this once.
This phase will not dwell on grammar, punctuation, vocabulary, or even arithmetic. I hope you’ve covered most of that already. Instead we will walk through the process of developing a story.The goal will be to produce a Masterpiece of erotic literature to be posted on the story side of the site, or even published elsewhere for fun and profit.
For now you will follow my steps.
1 Inspiration
2 Execution
3 Revision
4 Presentation
See serendipity; level 4, four steps, it’ll be a cinch.
Best of luck
Mad Lews
Last edited by Mad Lews; 11-21-2007 at 03:51 PM.
English does not borrow from other languages. English follows other languages into dark alleys, raps them over the head with a cudgel, then goes through their pockets for loose vocabulary and spare grammar.
" A student! a student! My umpire for a student!"
Oh wait I think I have one
here studie studie student....
alli alli oxen free!!
Lews and
English does not borrow from other languages. English follows other languages into dark alleys, raps them over the head with a cudgel, then goes through their pockets for loose vocabulary and spare grammar.
Yes, you are trapped all alone with Lews and Mad (which is not a thought to dwell on for very long). And our esteemed Mr. Dean is lurking somewhere.
Be afraid; be very afraid.
“To be completely woman you need a master and in him, a compass for your life. You need a man you can look up to and respect. If you dethrone him, it is no wonder that you are discontented, and discontented women are not loved for long.”- Marlene Dietrich
NOTE TO SELF: "Sadistic rat bastard, Sir!" is not a safeword!
I would be, but my innate arrogance and Domness prevents me from fearing even when faced with Mad Lewis and H Dean, I just expect to learn.
Rhabbi,
To make what you learn worthwhile you must survive,
to survive this level you must write.
I do hope this assignment is giving you an appreciation of exactly how precious words can be. I'm sure you'll not squander them having but 1,450 of the little buggers to work with.
A benevolent Mad offers the following tip, put the title in the Message title block and don't sign it, your Avatar will be your signature and we'll respect your copyright in this closed form. That alone might save you 3-5 words.
Mad & Lews
ps that's Lews not Lewis, ya think I'm French?
English does not borrow from other languages. English follows other languages into dark alleys, raps them over the head with a cudgel, then goes through their pockets for loose vocabulary and spare grammar.
ps that's Lews not Lewis, ya think I'm French? - Lews
There is no surrender in him. Though, there may be a little man with an accordian residing in the bowels of his being. Tis a shitty place.
For the Complete Version of "The Family Pet" and my latest story "Becoming Bimbo" please visit my author page on BDSM Books.
H Dean on BDSM Books.
Dearest Participants,
In the spirit of the season you may all take the afternoon off and need not be back to work until 6:00 am tomorrow.
Yes, you are welcome.
Mad Lews
Last edited by Mad Lews; 12-26-2007 at 06:21 AM.
English does not borrow from other languages. English follows other languages into dark alleys, raps them over the head with a cudgel, then goes through their pockets for loose vocabulary and spare grammar.
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