suissepervert
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Best advice I can give you pertaining to writing is this: Get very good with dialogue, it can make or break a story if it doesn't flow well. Also, learn how to balance good narrative with solid dialogue. Get those two correct and you'll do just fine.

Hat er. Aber die Qualität ist nicht so gut wie beim alten Bild. Ich wechsle möglicherweise wieder zurück.

thanks for reading my story. i'm sorry to say that i don't really have plans for more (other than submitting a revised version to correct the mistakes). i kind of just ran out of steam with the characters.

i do have a new story i'm writing, but it's going slowly.

thanks again!

Thanks for the review of Ponygirl. I have or had the next part 95% done when my computer died. I haven't tried to retrieve it, and I should. Thanks for the little push. I'll try soon and finish the editing and get it out. pttwyn@yahoo.com

thanks for peeking in on me..smiles..are you a writer of bondage stories?? I am a writer as well..smiles..see ya *waves*