Conversation Between CathySt11 and JimmyJump

Yep. Saw and read it. And reviewed it too, but the review is gone as the server went belly-up again and everything was set back to June of this year... But, since the same thing happened in December 2009 (set back to early March 2009; me losing around 500 reviews in the process) I made back-ups of my reviews... Am waiting til all the stories are up to add my comments again.

I felt "The Beginning Of My Last Thoughts" had a far more serious tone than "My Last Thoughts", with a kick-off where it seems you want to tell too many things in too short a space, giving a sense of unbalancedness and a rushed feel. I rated it a seven, for the time being, as I'm sure that things will become more 'setttled' and clearer as content is added, so, the 'score' will presumably go up. At least, that's how I forsee things, based on the pretty decent writing and storytelling...

JJ

did you see that i took your advise adn started the preface to my story...I hope you like it...

You're welcome, Cathy. Never mind the tongue-in-cheekness in some of my reviews, they're (usually) not ill-intended. Like I said, I found your writing to be above par, which makes you 'something' to cherish, as you as of now belong to that minority of good writers.

Just don't pay attention at the growing sea of fans flocking beneath your window, screaming for an encore. Let it flow in your own rhythm.

JJ

your kind review of my story was much appreciated. It is gratifing to learn that you enjoyed it and took the time to compliment me and it. It really makes the effort worthwhile to please readers such as your self.