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Not even the events of the afternoon had prepared Kris for what she found upon entering the dining room. The large hall was ablaze with light from the crystal candelabra, reflecting from the china and silver on the table. Rising from his place at the head of the table, the Marquis took her hand and led her to the seat at his right, gently lifted the chair into place and assumed his seat. With a slight motion of his hand, the Marquis signalled the waiter ...
Overwhelmed by the estate, the Marquis, and the generosity of the offer, Kris could only nod her assent. The Marquis smiled broadly again and pressed a button on the desk. Almost immediately a door opened to admit a petite young woman wearing a traditional maids uniform. The Marquis began to give instructions, "Deborah, take Kris upstairs to the guest room, see that she has everything she needs to properly prepare for dinner this evening. Give her any ...
I first wrote this almost 20 years ago. I put it away and recently brought it out. It needs updating, editting and reworking. This is the beginning draft. She had been trying to find a job for the better part of a month. Finally, in desperation, she answered the unusual ad in a small local weekly paper; the ad advertising a position as a light housekeeper and companion for a well to do gentleman. It really wasn't the sort of job she was interested in ...
Updated 09-24-2008 at 11:02 AM by TheDeSade