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Jenny's Slavery Chain
Author: MrBondskin
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(Added on Sep 6, 2000)
(This month 28315 readers) (Total 71192 readers) |
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Poor imprisoned Jenny must endure a unique and painful addition to her beautiful body's jewelry collection. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
susan_g
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Dec 2, 2014 |
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perfect BDSM slave story 5 stars (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jan 16, 2012 |
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I agree totally with most of the reviewers this is really too short to be a story, Norcalguy sums it up perfectly in that it is more of an excerpt than a story. I disagree though with the comments that it is too clinical, that is surely what the author was trying to convey.
What would improve this excerpt/story would be for another chapter or two and also some feelings from the girl that is watching this and the horror she must feel at learning she will be next. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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well done (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Feb 3, 2003 |
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liked it a lot. nice, short and powerfull - nice idea, thank you for sharing :)
redeva@hotmail.com (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie
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Jan 7, 2002 |
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It is rather short. And I find it hard to understand what's going on, because I don't really know anything about piercings, so I don't always understand completely (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
fyrekittyn |
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Mar 23, 2001 |
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Not much of a story and too hard to follow with ease... (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
edison |
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Oct 26, 2000 |
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only complaint is it was too short. wonderful enslavement, but hope it is a continuing saga. the "emotion" that other reviewers seem to want was understated, but so apparent. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Norcalguy |
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Oct 11, 2000 |
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Would be a great opening, or flash back. for a longer story. More of an excerpt than a story. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
L.M. |
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Sep 14, 2000 |
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The story well wasn't really there. Needs some more emotion. Nice ideas that could be explored more heavily! (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
ABrunetteWoman |
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Sep 13, 2000 |
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I agree with Leonard. Not much of a story at all, and what there was, wasn't very original or imaginative, and lacked emotion or passion. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Riverrat |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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A good start to a NC story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
tattoo pat |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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short story but a lot of imagination. Too "clinic" in a way but with a rather good end (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Leonard |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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Not much of a story. Short and without emotion. (2/10)
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