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Weekend Servitude
Author: Festen
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(Added on Feb 7, 2002)
(This month 61408 readers) (Total 81727 readers) |
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A man is "kidnapped" by a dominant couple he knows and serves as their sex slave for a weekend. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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Good situations but lacked the emotional, psychological subtext. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 3, 2004 |
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very good start wish the author would write more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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I liked the idea of a man occassionally serving a dominant couple, especially not knowing when or where it would occur. I also liked the writing as far as the content and description. The only thing I saw that really needed work was that it was toooo fast.You did not give your reader time to enjoy any of the encounters between the characters. I did like the relationship, what was seen of it between the couple and their sex slave. Next time, and I hope their will be a next time, relax. You seemed to be really nervous and anxious and that in order to ensure you said everything and did everythign you wanted to to , you tried to do it all at one time. Like I said, relax. Allow a little more flow and I think it will come easier. I hope my comments help. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Festen
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2004)
- Thanks for your kind words about my story. This was my first one. I have written a few others that are posted on the site, feel free to check them out. I agree with you, this story was very fast paced. I've slowly been revising and editing it to make it move along a bit slower.
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| Reviewer:
wlm9318
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Mar 17, 2002 |
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too short needs more (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
akiwi61
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Feb 10, 2002 |
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Its okay, needs more description of the events, a bit hurried (6/10)
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