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The Birthday Present
Author: rubbermark
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(Added on Nov 3, 2007)
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A women gives her dominant friend a birthday present she will never forget. Nor will her present forget the day he became a slave. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
playful
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Oct 22, 2016 |
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Loved the story... Are there plans for new chapters? (10/10)
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Escritor
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Mar 26, 2011 |
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Good story, very hot despite the frequent typos and grammar errors. It would have been great to develop more on the story about the two women and the kidnapping. And where did she go? Did she just give the gift and left? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
moonbeam1999
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Nov 13, 2007 |
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Absolutely awesome story. I have re-read it 3 times and desperately await another chapter! Please continue! (9/10)
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eager_beaver
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Nov 6, 2007 |
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I loved it, one of the best stories ive ever read here, keep those chapters coming. every time i read it, and reread it, i visualise myself in marks place, so keep the chapters coming. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
suzy9
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Nov 3, 2007 |
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Very good - and i look forward to another installment (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Nov 3, 2007 |
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Although I thought it to be too long, the story was well written and it was highly enjoyable. (8/10)
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