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Goddess Phyllis
Author: Michael
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(Added on Jul 17, 2007)
(This month 423402 readers) (Total 546564 readers) |
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Goddess Phyllis, her mother, and sister turn a submissive "man" into their personal shit eating whore. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MissPiss
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Dec 12, 2007 |
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Not a bad story, very well-written. But something about this story lacks emotion and feeling, wouldn't hurt to give us some background on the characters and what they're feeling and why they're doing this in the first place. Overall though, good story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Sep 12, 2007 |
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The story is quite well written - the author has a way with words and can string a sentence together for sure. But it didn't really work for me... I like to read things that I think could really happen, and this just seemed a little too "fantasy-ish" for me. Real people don't behave this way... and I get that that is part of the point of a story like this, that's it's a fantasy... but the author doesn't really go into how the people are feeling, so you don't get anything to convince you that they would go along with this. There's no real effort to get the reader to suspend their disbelief.
It has promise, though. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
WyldWyl
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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Not exactly to my taste, but fairly well written with some interesting ideas. Not bad at all. (6/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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intresting conceot, i have seen similat stories butthis oner is in reverse rle what what i have read before (6/10)
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