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    | The Greatest Submission
    
    Author: Hawk_Fann & Sbbe |   
    |  | (Added on Aug 14, 2006)
            (This month 131682 readers) (Total 148001 readers) |   
    |  | The greatest submission Jason could ask of his slave was for her to dominate. |  
 
   
    | Ratings and Reviews: |   
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      Average (?):  (8.5/10) |   
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      Rating:  (9/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 23, 2009 |   
    |  | excellent, well done (10/10) 
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    frankee
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 27, 2006 |   
    |  | Awesome!!! i love the characters and i hope there is more adventures in stores fo them! (9/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 28, 2006)Smiles, thank you frankee. We already have a start on some little adventures for our little group. Glad you enjoyed it. I'll let Master Hawk know.  |  
 
   
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    smokey1957
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 18, 2006 |   
    |  | Just a bit difficult to get in the story but when your in it is anice story to reed. I do hope that the writer wil continue to write more of this two slaves (9/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 18, 2006)We are very glad you enjoyed the story and gave us such a good rating. We already have plans for more Sarah stories. Thank you
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    dennisthmn
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 17, 2006 |   
    |  | A very good story, execelent BDSM (7/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 17, 2006)We appreciate the kind comments. Thank you. |  
 
   
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    pj1488
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 16, 2006 |   
    |  | i enjoyed the story immensely and hope you write more. the use of the slave to dominate his wife was a fantastic idea, look forward to reading more. (9/10) 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 16, 2006)It makes a writer's job so fun when people enjoy your writing. Master will be please to hear you enjoyed his idea. |  
 
   
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    | Reviewer: 
    little_rose
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 15, 2006 |   
    |  | WOW! So good guys, well done. I really liked the fact that we had both sides to empathise with- dominatee and dominator.
 Very hot:) (9/10)
 
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StillBehindBlueEyes
  (Edit)  (Aug 15, 2006)Thank you so much. We really enjoyed writing it. I'll let Master know you enjoyed it. :) |  |  |