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Virtual Punishments
Author: obohobo
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(Added on Apr 5, 2006)
(This month 16729 readers) (Total 32975 readers) |
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Two young girls try out the adult virtual reality games and find out the painful way, why they are intended for adult males. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
laursie
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Apr 10, 2006 |
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Very different. First time I read one like this. A great read. (8/10)
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H Dean
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Not a bad story but also rather difficult to get into. The opening conversation between a 16 year old and her father did not strike me as being remotely believable. Really, it was this that derailed the train and it never got back on track for me. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Very Very Well Done. Its been a while since I have read that good of a story. I do think you could add to this, letting the girls play out the whole game (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Apr 6, 2006 |
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Very special this virtual sex and bdsm story.
In fact with this subject you are free to imagine nearly everything. (9/10)
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