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Sara and Ms Davies
Author: jamb
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(Added on Aug 13, 2005)
(This month 99122 readers) (Total 156126 readers) |
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New to the city, Sara is confused when a woman asks her out for a date. She soon finds out that this woman is no ordinary lesbian... |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
leanne
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Apr 10, 2006 |
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I love this story. I couldn't stop thinking about it at work last night. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
pooja
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Apr 7, 2006 |
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Excellent story,i enjoy it.I hope in next part of story sara will be punish more in a romantic way by her mistress Davies. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
PLP21
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Aug 23, 2005 |
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waiting for the next 3 chapters looking forward to them that was great! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lindalooking
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Aug 16, 2005 |
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The writer (jamb) took an excellent idea, put in a great location for the idea, then dropped the ball big time. Maybe it’s just me, but I enjoy a story that takes the character somewhere they really don’t want to go. To have the writer tells us how our poor submissive is feeling let’s me down. I don’t want to read that “she” is really enjoying this terrible ordeal, let me feel it in the words.
Anyway, I always feel terrible when I can not say something nice about someone who has taken the time to actually write a story, and then post it. Sometimes it is easier to just ignore it, but this story had such a fresh idea that then did not go anywhere so I felt the need to comment.
I understand that there will be additions, which can be a good thing and maybe will improve the story.
(5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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I hope there will be some follow up to the story. This would work well as an introduction to a larger piece, but by itself it needs more "meat". (5/10)
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- Replied by:
jamb
(Edit) (Aug 15, 2005)
- Do not fear, there shall be more to this story. This is merely the introduction.
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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A really nice short story. Compact but not compressed. A skilled writing transports the atmosphere to the reader. (8/10)
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Rocky
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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Very hot little story. I do hope to see more! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 13, 2005 |
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good start i hope youp lan to add more later (8/10)
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