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Remote Control
Author: Ross Martin
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(Added on Jul 17, 2005)
(This month 12844 readers) (Total 31212 readers) |
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A man in Australia has a woman in LA tortured. The torturer is the woman's own lesbian lover who simply loves going to town on her sub. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Jul 24, 2005 |
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Incredibly hot and ingenious! Exelent format too.
It keeps coming (and cuming) without those boring descriptions that tend to clog stories like this one.
Prime piece of writing. (9/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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Very, very interesting. Good piece of erotica. (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jul 20, 2005 |
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A nice little story with lots of torture, torment and sex. (What more could you ask for?) I liked the internet-chat format it not only was a strong, realistic basis for the tale; It helped move it along. Felt like humming the " It's a small world after all" ditty. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Jul 18, 2005 |
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The frequent use of clips from an internet conversation was highly offputting, and I suspect they take up more space than the actual story. I simply was not impressed, the whole story felt like a first effort, or even just notes on a story with enough added in to try to pass it off as a story. And the Young code was just utterly not needed. (6/10)
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LordVetinari
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Jul 18, 2005 |
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What a wonderful story! It has everything: Sex, torture, cruelty, humliation, electricity. Boffo, a really good one! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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i hope you plan to add more (7/10)
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darkldy8892
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Jul 17, 2005 |
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I very much enjoyed this story. It was in my opinion realistic and very erotic. I could visualize what was happening in the story and I feel that is an important thing for me. Shows lots of imagination and forthought as to what each would be feeling and thinking. (10/10)
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