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Getting Even
Author: Vector
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(Added on Jun 7, 2005)
(This month 18123 readers) (Total 43845 readers) |
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Boy is humilated in high school by a beatuful stuck up bitch. He makes a fortune on an internet company, and 6 years later runs into the bitch. He desides to take her to his island to make her pay for her sins against him. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jun 12, 2005 |
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I was tempted to give you a 5 just so you'ld have a straight flush. Actually a preaty good story line with some original ideas to an old vengence story
We will follow the story and edit the score as it deserves. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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Interesting storyline. I have never seen it before. I am very interestd to see where you go from here. Pretty good development of characters but something new every now and then, as long as it fits, would be good as well. Overall, I think you are off to a good start on simple creativity alone. (6/10)
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Darcprince
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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imagine actually tring to deal with a feamle that weights 325 lbs. just not something that gets one attention...at least not mine. (4/10)
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rce
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Jun 10, 2005 |
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A good story with an original way of subduing a woman, though the story in itself is by no means original. I'd be interested in seeing how the story continues. (7/10)
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Engineer
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Jun 8, 2005 |
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A wonderful, imaginative start! Will surely get a 10, when finished! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
KITTIG
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Jun 8, 2005 |
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Wow! great first chapter! Very intriguing and the possibilities are endless. Quite an unusual introduction but had me gripped straight away. More please!!! (9/10)
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