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Cutty
Author: bokkey
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(Added on May 11, 2005)
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The mysterious ms Brendan wants a lesbian relationship with Donna, and more... |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Voracious Reader
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Mar 25, 2015 |
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Right now, THIS story is why I check back on the BDSM Library site! I can't wait to find out what Ms. Brendan has planned for Cutty next, and the future so far hinted at sounds delicious!
VERY engaging story.
ETA: It has now been a year since an updated chapter was added. WILL there be more? I keep checking back, and hoping.... I'd love to change my rating to a 10, but an incomplete / stalled story can never get a ten from me....
Hope to see me someday, but I'll probably only check in monthly from now on.
Edited to add further: Bockey wrote in May 2012 that he (she?) is unfortunately busy right now, but DOES plan on finishing the saga of Cutty! Good news, and I guess we must all be patient.
ETA March 2015 - Still patiently waiting. Sent note to bokkey last month, but haven't heard back. (9/10)
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sicnarf
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Jun 11, 2012 |
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wow , what a plot and i can't wait for the next chapter .
One of the best stories on this site and when you start reading , you will want to know how it continues ! (10/10)
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TOXIS
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Dec 27, 2009 |
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Truly an excellent story and getting better. Real emphasis on making the characters real, making the situations believable. No mind drugs, no deus ex machina to fix a plot hole - just first rate story telling. Gotta love it.
Just an added note for 2010 - We're all waiting to see what happens next. Anxiously. Don't leave us on the hook dangling. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2007)
- thank you!!
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JimmyJump
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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Best Bokkey story so far. Again, however, the story starts with a rather non-existent blackmail plot, but once the shaky start is behind us, the storyline develops quite nicely and the writing becomes more fluent. Well done!!! Just try to keep an eye on your keyboard more often, please, as there's a lot of silly spelling mistakes...
JJ
*EDIT*
Upped the score from nine to ten, because the story is nothing short from a small masterpiece, being at the same time a tremedous erotic BDSM novel and a study in twisted female psychology... magnifico!
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Oct 17, 2006)
- Will try to have someone proof reading my chapters
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Mar 31, 2008)
- Here was I, complainig about spelling mistakes, while I myself made the most horrible error possible and that is to misspell the author's name...
After almost two years, I finally corrected my fault. My apologies to you, Bokkey.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
Piret Altmae
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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Just the best i've read. Waiting all the time for continuation. Thanx. Piret. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2009)
- Thank you very much for the positive review. Sorry you have to wait so long for the chapters; just don't have enough time to write...
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 3, 2009)
- No need for an apology, Bokkey. I think most of us here are truly appreciative for the fact that you do add chapters still, even though you have so little time.
"Cutty" is a brilliant tale which I'll keep following for sure, even if it would take you another 10 years to finish it.
You have my gratitude, both for the tale and for your perseverance.
JJ
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Prevaliant
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Jul 19, 2008 |
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One of the very best stories of the blackmail genre and the very reason for checking the BDSM Library.
I hope we get a continuation soon! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2009)
- Thank you for the good review, hope you keep on liking it as the story progresses
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mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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unbelievably hot, the storlyine was great, as was te flow and the detail
Just keeps getting better and better (10/10)
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fuckcutty
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Oct 9, 2007 |
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please don't make cutty a lesbian. the story is going great and humiliate her by making her fuck 4 different people of different races in a day. also make her to use a lot of toys (hidden vibrators in both her holes) continuously to fuck herself in public (9/10)
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m262
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Apr 15, 2007 |
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Excellent story! Will be next parts? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2007)
- Thank you, I am busy with the next chapter(s), but ave little time to write
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slaveanita
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Feb 14, 2007 |
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I am about halfway through this at the moment and am thoroughly enjoying it. I will adjust my rating as I move along ( the only dropping of points was for niggly grammatical problems but please don't let that discourage - the creativity more than compensates! ) Having said that, at other times the prose is out of the top drawer. It's kept me busy for several hours and I'm going straight back for more. x (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2007)
- Thank you, and I hope the the other half keeps up with your expectations
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| Reviewer:
moimoimoi
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Dec 6, 2006 |
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There is an author here who know how to always bring new excitements in his story. I always are looking forward to see a new chapter and have never been deceive. I corespond with this author several times and he have always take the time to give me a feedback on what I have write to him. I wish here to take the time to thanks him publicly for his time and especialy for his good story. It is not often that we see a writer give us something that good on a free site and I think it should be publish for all to see when there is. Thank you again dear author and please continue this exceptional story. Just can't wait to see more of it and hope it will be for several aditional chapters. I could just see this story goes for a long, long, long time in the futur. (10/10)
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azrlg17
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Oct 23, 2006 |
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Nice story for fans of blackmail. Good sex. But in the end it gets too hard for my tastes. I understand blackmailing someone into sex but I don't know what is so nice about totally destroying someones life, family and personality.
After the good friend of the victim is murdered she should have killed her torturer. I mean not only has ms Brendan showed that she is capable of killing someone but she is threatening her kids. That should make Donna snap. When does the "motherlion" come out? She is never checked for weapons when she comes to ms Brendan. Should be easy to smuggle a knife in and kill the evil bitch. But even that is not necessary. Nobody is all powerful. Maybe she can blackball them in one or two cities. But not in the whole country. And someone as ms B. has to have a lot of enemies. Some of them would surely be glad to give a job to anyone ms B. tries to ruin.
The story really gets extreme and unpleseant after the (and including the) Caribbean chapter. From then on I would only give it 3 or 4 points, before that more like 8 or 9. It's really beyond awful. When Donna arrives back at the hotel she could have gotten rid real easy of the thugs but nooooo she lets them up into her room and we had to have a totally unrealistic rape scene. She rather lets her daughters think she's a slut instead of telling them she was raped? What's up with that? And then afterwards her daughters tell everything to ms Brendan? When have they even met her? Since when do they have such a close relationship with her? There is no good sex afterwards only more and more public scenes, masturbating in front of her daughters, fucking a dildo in front of a friend and getting the therapist from hell. It simply gets totally unrealistic.
Apart from that good grammar, few typos only sometimes some homonyms like new and knew, to and too, plain and plane,... are mixed up. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Oct 24, 2006)
- Logic behind the scenes:
The Caribbean was a rape. But she was drunk and maybe on drugs too, so it looked consensual. Her daughters, knowing better, chose to see it that way. Julie in love with her vacation sweetheart, Trixy by her side, they didn't want to face reality. the anger towards the mother was more because of messing up a good thing, even if she was not truly to blame. And the mother just wanted to leave and not mention it anymore.
The daughters see ms Brendan as a role model and know she is a friend of the mother, so when she approached them (might have) with all her wisdom they decided to tell all. And ms Brendan might have tweaked an turned the story, both towards them and towards Donna.
When Donna was told just like you do now to get up and act, the one telling her to was killed in cold blood (or so we assume she was killed, it might just as well have been an accident). I didn't love to write that scene, but from the point of view of ms Brendan removing Vivian was necessary both to keep her secrets, as well as to get Donna back in line. Btw, you did notice ms Brendan complaining she hadn't rebelled yet?
Now Donna is facing a whole different enemy, and needs to protect her family, as well as attack ms Brendan, and her group. That will need some planning, and in the mean time she needs to go along.
Hope this explains a bit how I see it. Send me a mail if you want to discuss some more.
Thanks for the comments, and the next posts ar proof read (so might take a bit longer)
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azrlg17
(Edit) (Nov 13, 2006)
- Whether ms Brendan had Vivian killed or not is irrelevant as long as Donna believes it is so. She might even have been abducted and is in a dungeon of Ms. Brendan.
She doesn't need much for her plan of attack. She can't go to the cops, she can't get lawyers and the press is out probably too. The only route open is to get a weapon, go to ms Brendan and stop her permanently. After all, what has she got to loose? Her marriage is already pretty damaged because either her hubby expects her to behave like she did at the weekend of 25 or she tells him and he will be hurt that she fucked him because she was ordered to. Her relationship with her daughters is damaged or destroyed after the carribean (and the lies and the therapy afterwards) and her best friend is dead. She knows it only will get worse. She knows Ms Brendan has an interest in her daughters. Her body will soon be altered even more if she doesn't stop it. She can figure out that the endpoint will be something like Rebecca and her daughter. People who have nothing to loose are dangerous. And she probably even has a chance for a low sentence because there are so many victims. Of course if she does strike back, please let her torture ms Brendan a bit :-).
And while I understand why Donna didn't ask the cops for help with her rape in the carribean (this is after all the bdsm-library where less than 0.1% do that) there is no reason why she let them come up to her hotel room for an encore.
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TOXIS
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2009)
- This story has evolved into a classic. It is on its way to
becoming a real novel with three-dimensioal characters,meaningful plot and yet highly erotic. Considering how the story has grown and the regard of readers who have commented more recently, wouldn't it only be fair to to take another look. I think you'll be impressed. This story deserves to be a consensus 10. Thanks.
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dennisthmn
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Sep 28, 2006 |
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one of the best (10/10)
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stonetoast
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Sep 17, 2006 |
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Great saga! Wonderful character develoment! We want more! I'm looking forward to seeing how the two girls and their mom evolve toward one another, ultimately taking on similar styles and lifestyles. I also look forward to seeing Donna inconsciously mentor them, all the while being manipulated by her own mistresses and (perhaps) Julie. (10/10)
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Parker
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Apr 16, 2006 |
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Nice story. I do hope that you're going to continue and bring it to a conclusion. It deserves a strong ending. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
bokkey2004
(Edit) (Feb 15, 2007)
- Wanted to say thank you for a long time. I'm really proud to have one of my favorite writers complimenting me. Hope the story keeps up with your expectations.
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Granite_II
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Sep 7, 2005 |
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Excellent! Keep it coming! It is erotic how Donna is trained step by step. I can't wait to see what develops. (10/10)
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XEQtor
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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Fully agree with 'rilawild' on pacing of Donna & not looking fwd to similar scenes like the origin of 'cutty'. So far, the author cleverly weaves thru the psychological aspects of the 'actors'. The pacing of the story is also v well timed, cutting quickly to the chase when needed and pausing to drag out meaningful scenes. A roller-coaster ride for me. I seldom see authors adopting such techniques. I hope to see many more chapters (and hopefully more frequent additions). I'm giving this a 9.7.
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rilawild
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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Excellent ongoing story. The pace of Donna's descent is perfectly timed with her humiliation being ratcheted up slowly. The only fly in the ointment for too is the initial cutting that gives the story its name. I hope that when Donna's subission is complete that it doesn't involve much more of that and sticks to more pschological torture. (9/10)
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pechho
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May 26, 2005 |
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Great story. I'm looking forward to how Cutty's relation to her husband will change, which I assume cannot be avoided. :-) (9/10)
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cardinal
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May 20, 2005 |
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Great story, should be continued! What will Donna do next? (9/10)
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Mobius
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May 12, 2005 |
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Always love a good forced lesbian Domination story. This one I hope will continue for many more chapters. While i think donna being cut and then having the name cuty was not realy necisary but it was a great story none the less.
Kudos and more for a great story keep up the great work
Moby (9/10)
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castle2001
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May 11, 2005 |
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A story with good lines that should be continued. There is still so much more that Donna can be coerced into doing. (9/10)
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