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Chloe - Dominated and Degraded
Author: Lex Ludite
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(Added on Sep 17, 2004)
(This month 206521 readers) (Total 504974 readers) |
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Domination and degradation in the extreme as Chloe Starkers, a young FBI agent on the fast track, is forced to exchange her freedom and dignity in exchange for her supervisor's silence about certain elements of her personal life. Chloe endures a variety of fiendish torments as well as rape as she is slowly transformed into his mindless slave. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 25, 2009 |
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Only thing that keeps putting me off, is the fact that Lex's male leads always seem to behave like a cross between a James Cagney and Edward G. Robinson movie character...
Otherwise, Ludite's storiers are inventive and fun reads, although sometimes there's so many excurtions off the main plotline that one fails to see the forest through the trees.
However, not here. At least, not so much.
That's why there's a ten at the end.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2010)
- I am mortified to discover that this excellent review was overlooked for reasons that are beyond me. Please accept my apologies and know that it will never happen again, unless it happens again.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2010)
- Seems I've overlooked you overlooking me, which must have us been looking in all directions except at each other, which is a good thing as I sometimes am not to look at...
Thou art forgiven, Lex.
JJ
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Mothbrad
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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I was tossing up whether to give this one a 9 or a 10 - I think that there are technically better stories around (even written by Mr Ludite), but this one just has too much that hits me deep and hard. Hell, this is just about the perfect story for me in some ways. As usual, there's a sense of humanity here that's lacking in so many other extreme stories, and also a bit of humour when appropriate. Please keep the story coming, Lex! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2007)
- Your review and most generous rating are very much appreciated. You are accurate concerning what drives my characters in many cases. I hate stick figures, be they tops or bottoms. This particular story, as in most of mine, started out as one thing and morphed into something else. It has proven to be rather easy to write, not a normal situation for me. I can hardly wait to see where it will go from here, especially since I've got more villains lurking about for their moment on the stage.
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H Dean
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Dec 26, 2006 |
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What can be said about this story that hasn't already been said before. Lex, as always, your stories flow well and read cleanly from start to finish, drawing me onward, even if I get grossed out or turned off by the content. This is not exception. I should have reviewed this ages ago, when I first started reading it. My apologies for never having done so. This is another strong story in a library of strong stories.
Now, the one complaint...I felt the word "cunt" was over used earlier in the story. I've no aversion to the word, I just felt it was hammered on a bit much. I'll sit down and shut up now. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Dec 27, 2006)
- Your review is very much appreciated, doubly so because it comes from an author I respect for his talent,which I fear is much more sophisticated than my efforts. On the subject of the use of the word "cunt", that is a vexing situation. There are a variety of other words that have been used, but "cunt" is my favorite for its directness and brutal nature. I am doing my best to wean myself from this nasty addiction, but alas I probably will continue to be its slave.
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| Reviewer:
cindi
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Jul 15, 2005 |
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truly outstanding, (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2005)
- Many thanks for your most generous rating. I hope that the remaining installments will keep you entertained as well.
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LordVetinari
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Apr 8, 2005 |
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I don't know how I missed this story before. Wow! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Apr 17, 2005)
- Your most generous rating and review are greatly appreciated. There is still more to go in this story before matters are completely resolved. I have come to an interesting fork in the road and have not as yet decided which path to take.
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lindakaye
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Jan 14, 2005 |
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Stephen King has nothing over on you as far as the imagination goes.. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Jan 19, 2005)
- Thanks for the compliment. I do make a conscious effort to make my stuff a little bit more than average when it comes to the nastier side of things. I've finished two more chapters and they mark the completion of the first portion of the story and the set-up for the next phase. Hope you enjoy them.
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bracemaiden
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Nov 13, 2004 |
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What more can I say - I agree with a lot of the other reviews -
"your story kept me in it, even though I'm not terribly interested in bathroom sex. That's saying something." - chksng19
"hope Cloe will be further humiliated , maybe by making her dress slutty" - sissyslave
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 14, 2004)
- Your comments are appreciated. Chloe is one story that almost seems to be writing itself. There are plenty of surprises awaiting those who stay with this one.
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lil dragon
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Nov 8, 2004 |
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can't wait to read more - the only reason i've not given a 10 is the unfinished nature of your story - i'll be watching closely for new installments, many thanks for an excellent read so far ... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2004)
- Your most positive review is greatly appreciated. I will try not to disappoint you with future installments which shall be appearing within a week or so.
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fssfan13
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Oct 30, 2004 |
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Quite creative. If you manage not to repeat the same torture ideas in the newer chapters, the story would be oustanding. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 30, 2004)
- Thank you for the flattering review of this story. Be advised that I try not to ever repeat myself when it comes to the meatier sections of my stories.
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chksng19
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Oct 14, 2004 |
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I'd go 9.5 if I could; few authors can compete with the quality of this story. Excellent writing skills and exposition of your characters help this story flow smoothly and keeps the reader wanting more.
Lex, your story kept me in it, even though I'm not terribly interested in bathroom sex. That's saying something.
Looking forward to the next chapter! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2004)
- Thanks for a most generous review. This one started out one way, and it's now headed for parts unknown. There will be many twists and turns before it's done.
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Oct 3, 2004 |
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Can't wait to read more of Chloe's humiliation. Great start. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2004)
- Please accept my apologies for not responding to your most flattering review in a more timely fashion. There is a great deal in store for my poor heroine and where it goes is still a moot point.
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sissyslave
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Sep 28, 2004 |
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very good story
hpe Cloe will be further humiliated , maybe by making her dress slutty
hope to read more soon
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Sep 28, 2004)
- Thanks for your most generous review. Be advised that the process of changing her attire had already started in chapter 1. It will really start getting interesting in chapters 5 and beyond when she not only starts dressing slutty, but has her figure modified to make her look even more like a tramp.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 26, 2004 |
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hot (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2004)
- Many thanks for your most generous ranking. This one is developing a life of its own. Stay turned for further developments.
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Sep 25, 2004 |
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Excellent beginning to the story. We anticipate many torments for poor Chloe and look forward to seeing them soon. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2004)
- Please accept my apologies for this delay in responding to your most generous review. Be advised that poor Chloe and her roommate, the blonde bombshell, are in for lots of delicious trouble in the very near future.
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| Reviewer:
edsun
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Sep 18, 2004 |
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well written - looking forward to how the plot develops (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2004)
- What can I say except please accept my humble apologies for forgetting to acknowledge your most generous review. The plot has already begun to thicken and there is plenty more on the horizon as a few additional characters are added.
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