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The Home From Hell
Author: Big Bad
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(Added on Mar 25, 2004)
(This month 30721 readers) (Total 58490 readers) |
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This story is about a Orphan Home set in the future when peoples morals and attitudes about many things have changed.People no longer want take responsibility for their actions andforce their goverments to deal with the problem,this includes the children they bring into the world.Most of them end up in places like The Home From Hell. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 7, 2006 |
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was ok (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 17, 2005 |
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I find it sad this Author as not updated the story, as it started out so well (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jeanne
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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A promising story but that is the third such promising story by Big Bad! Time to keep your promises, ie fully describe some of the fun in the B&D Academy, orphan house or hell school! Come on, you\'ve got it in you. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 26, 2004 |
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This is a very strange, strong brew that the author has cooked up. It is definitely not for the faint of heart. It sort of reminds me a bit of Sym Cyber's stuff mixed with a soupcon of the ugliness of Mr. Ed. It could benefit from better editing, but otherwise it has the potential to be an 800 pound gorilla of a story. I certainly recommend this one to the hard edge crowd despite the age of the victims. However based on the fact that the author failed to go beyond this point on his two other attempts at writing this story, I must warn folks that the chances of seeing anything more from him is not very good. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 26, 2004 |
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While I appreciate the premise of the story, too many small errors (not just misspellings but missing words or incorrect ones) make for less enjoyment and distract from the reading pleasure.
Less of a travelogue-feel, more like a story with ongoing action from the second or third paragraph helping provide background rather than baldly describing the facts would make it lots more enjoyable.
BigBad, no slam intended here. I've read some of your other stories and enjoyed them. This one just needs some polish. (5/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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I am very ambivalent about Big Bad. Our themes and styles of writing are so close that I am not sure when I review Big Bad I am not reviewing my own work. But Big Bad is different, I never do M/m or F/m and the kids are a bit younger than I deal with, and of course, I also do mommies. None the less, I have to admit that I really like and admire Big Bad's work. Have to see how this one developes. If you even mildly like this work, click on Big Bad's underscored name to get to the listing of their other work and sample some. You certainly don't want to trust my opinion, read it for yourself.
I want more canings of girls! (7/10)
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