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Beyonce Becomes a Ponygirl Author: Anita Parker
(Added on Nov 23, 2003) (This month 50017 readers) (Total 112726 readers)
Pop singer Beyonce is subjected to an unpleasant new life.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: Denkira (Edit) Rating: Dec 22, 2014
good pony play aspects and bdsm (10/10)

Reviewer: DON609 (Edit) Rating: May 29, 2011
Loved the story. Beyonce as a Pony, Cool. have read it a few times just that fun. (9/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 19, 2009
Though not an amateur of spoofs, I found this tale to be very enjoyable and well written.
JJ (8/10)

Reviewer: dennisthmn (Edit) Rating: Oct 3, 2006
very good. (9/10)

Reviewer: USMC4ME (Edit) Rating: Apr 12, 2006
Girl Girl Girl you have to write another story! You have a gift. And brainstorming would be such fun right? - LOL
See where it takes you - and remeaber to go slow and steady, keep our minds transfixed on her body, and her strain and sweet suffering. Maybe throw in a "Good Cop" character somewhere along the plot for a twist.
Good luck!
(10/10)

Reviewer: nyko (Edit) Rating: Jun 26, 2005
I liked it, well written, very descriptive, I would like to see more, get typing girl (7/10)

Reviewer: jake_t42 (Edit) Rating: Jun 5, 2005
This story was written so long ago I guess the writer isn't expanding or writing any more ponygirl stories :(
I also loved this story, because it is the most forced and extreme pony girl story I have ever read, and there aren't any out there that have come even close to the quality of this.
I liked how every moment of trotting caused her discomfort, I would have liked to hear her describe the feeling of being plugged with the dildos a bit more, maybe some description of what the Mistress was seeing as she exercised her :) An extra torment would be making her do her pony training with the enama still in her.
I hope this author does another story.
(9/10)

Reviewer: TAW (Edit) Rating: May 4, 2005
I loved this story. The author does a great job describing the "breaking" of Beyonce. The details of her training, her outfits and even her inner narrative are all realistic and allow for a suspension of disbelief. Plus which..I just *love* the idea of Beyonce being treated like this.
I just wish the author hadn't chosen to give her a Mohawk. Overall though, this story just rocks!
I would have to say...my only complaint is that it has left me wanting more...more...more!. Please...write another chapter...or two...or three! (8/10)

Reviewer: kleintje15 (Edit) Rating: Aug 3, 2004
very well written story not to slow not to fast and a great cum (9/10)

Reviewer: Enrique Calzada (Edit) Rating: May 4, 2004
Part one was a truly excellent pure bondage tale,
even if a bit formulaic. Excellent pacing and attention to detail.
Parts two and three did not, in my opinion, maintain the intensity.
My only serious gripe would be that a fictional victim
might have broadened the appeal.
(7/10)

Reviewer: Grey Slayer (Edit) Rating: Jan 27, 2004
Enjoyable story so far. Well written and engaging. I am eager to read of the additional trails and (of course!) punishments that Beyonce has to endure. (8/10)

Reviewer: reverie35 (Edit) Rating: Jan 23, 2004
Segments two and three have developed well. I like your descriptions of the control that the pony expereinces, the boredom of being a pony and the use of the whip by the mistress. A story that continues to get better. Keep writing!! (9/10)

Reviewer: Darkstar2173 (Edit) Rating: Jan 20, 2004
Its a good story. I love it when ungrateful and stuck up people get whats coming to them. (7/10)

Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Dec 30, 2003
I think that the story codes could have been more detailed - this was NC, exhibition, etc... The story codes should have also given some clue to the pain aspect.
I agree that the celebrity protagonist was a bit far-reaching, but a lot of the general writing was good.
The hair trimming and removal of vocal cords were good plot devices, and I liked the addition of the butt-plug and dildo. The humiliation scenes were well written.
(7/10)

Reviewer: Kira (Edit) Rating: Dec 14, 2003
Very nice Ponygirl story already by starting, I can't wait for the next hot parts, some body modification is everytime on right place here. She is a great pop singer, also in fantasy she makes as a ponygirl a nice figure. (10/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Dec 13, 2003
Love Pony Girl Stories, only wish you had use a non celebritiy in the story line, it would make it far more belevable (9/10)

Reviewer: cagedsgt (Edit) Rating: Dec 1, 2003
One of those that you want to go on and on and on and well where's the rest. (9/10)

Reviewer: AndrewBlack (Edit) Rating: Dec 1, 2003
Fantastic ponygirl story. Can't wait for the next installment! (10/10)

Reviewer: steph (Edit) Rating: Nov 30, 2003
One of the best ponygirl stories i have read. my heart was racing with excitement! (9/10)

Reviewer: tormented (Edit) Rating: Nov 26, 2003
poor beyonce, cant wait for the next part of her ordeal.. (8/10)

Reviewer: Bonif51 (Edit) Rating: Nov 25, 2003
Wonderful ponygirl story. I hope the author continues to write other stories. (8/10)
Replied by: Anita Parker (Edit) (Dec 4, 2003)
This is the first story I have written and certainly the first thing I have submitted on-line. It's great to know someone actually likes it!

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