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Loyla Daughter
Author: Cowgirl & Orestes
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(Added on Feb 9, 2001)
(This month 43365 readers) (Total 76752 readers) |
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(Co-authored by Orestes) Teenager Amy can't figure out why her mother is bending over backwords to please Tina, a arrogent girl in her twenties who works in a position *under* her mother, until Amy disovers the bizarre little game they play together in private. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 18, 2012 |
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Not my style but descent material none the less. At least it was a full story with an ending. What bothered me the most is that it was never explained why this all occurred. (6/10)
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Euryleia
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Mar 16, 2008 |
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I really enjoy the way that the authors get into the main characters head. The increasing humiliation happened at a good pace and the ending was right up my alley. Like many of their stories, though, it is flawed by spelling errors. Otherwise, this tale would have gotten ten stars from me. (8/10)
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rhmusic
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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An amazing story with the best ending ever. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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real enjoyable, love the humiliation aspect, please keep writing like this (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dunko
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Mar 2, 2002 |
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Again, cowgirl shows the ultimate in humiliation and domination. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Silverfish
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Apr 12, 2001 |
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An extremely slow and dull story, at least at for a while. I have to admit the first time I skimmed it I skipped right to the end because nothing really held my attention... luckily the very end (in wonderful Cowgirl fashion) suddenly made the rest of the story worth reading, but more on this later. I went back and read the first three parts all over again. By the end of the first part a great deal of domination takes place over Debbie, a mother, by a young teenage girl, Tina. In the second part of the the story Debbie's daughter Amanda gets in on the act. Part three I just plain couldn't get through. The entire story seems to build and ebb slowly towards the fourth part, where it really shines. The pink doggy collar and the psychology behind Amanda's choice is beautifully written. Her new position in life is also humiliating and somehow refreshingly original in the way it's written. As a finaly note, like in most of Cowgirl's tales the story ends on an all time high, leaving the reader to imagine the events that might come in a sequel (which will likely never be written). The final two paragraphs, while small, engage the reader and makes leaves him wanting more. A slow, believable story that suddenly picks you off your feet and sails away in the final part. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
AceRcher |
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Mar 10, 2001 |
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These are two of the best authors writing about humiliation today. It was a pleasure to read this collaborative effort with some original ideas. More please. (8/10)
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atl-ga |
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Feb 19, 2001 |
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Good story. liked the domination of the young girl by another young girl. Needs a stronger ending to make it an 8 rating. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Becky |
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Feb 18, 2001 |
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A little on the weak side. It could of been a better story if the author would of took more time. (5/10)
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Racecar |
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Feb 13, 2001 |
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Very well written and an engaging scenario. I enjoyed the story very much but wish it had been longer. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kevin |
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Feb 11, 2001 |
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Great story needs to be continued as it is rare for a story like this with the amount of background contained to end so quickly. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
James |
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Feb 10, 2001 |
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BORING. Major boredom. zzzzzzzzzzzzzz (2/10)
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