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A submissive's Stories
Author: Eric Boosa
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(Added on Feb 11, 2003)
(This month 51028 readers) (Total 63726 readers) |
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A story about a Mistress turning a slave into a woman and taking him out on the town. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 11, 2006 |
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terrible grammar, it says part 1 only, i hope there is no part 2 (3/10)
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Drax
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Feb 18, 2003 |
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Story was gittery and the writing was 6th grade level. But plot was "inventive' Try again, only reread it for errors before submitting. (3/10)
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