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Cindy and Company
Author: pamela
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(Added on Nov 20, 2002)
(This month 102566 readers) (Total 216971 readers) |
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Cindy is the queen of her high school, but her home life is a different matter. When she turns down a date with a nerdy fellow student, she has no idea what she's starting. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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Riptide
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Oct 10, 2011 |
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Wonderful story. Ireally enjoyed it. (10/10)
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ALLAHHAVEMERCY
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Jun 23, 2011 |
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One of the best most nostalgic read i have ever read. so sad and so romantic and yet so beautiful. (10/10)
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Dr. White
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Feb 26, 2011 |
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Excellent writing. The characters seem really alive. Especially Chet at the beginning. Nice little series of vignettes through the middle. I thoroughly enjoyed it, though I expected different outcomes for some of the characters. I suppose that is another hallmark of good writing, keep your audience guessing and coming back for more. (9/10)
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thehammerspakeagain
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May 24, 2010 |
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The most beautiful story I have ever read, this story is by far the best I have seen on this site. Not only was it stimulating, which it was very much, but also has such depth to it--like one of those stories one used to read in English class--what was it--Ethan Froh? or Wuthering Heights. Only this is better than them! Every high school student should be required to read this story instead of Catcher in the Rye or Pride and Predujice. Almost made me wander back to my high school days. It would have easily tumbled over the edge if bleakness weren't such a reliable prophylactic against tears. Even days after reading it I still cannot recover fully from the emotions of the story.
It is so beautiful, and romantic. It reads like a testosterone driven romance story, a romance story for men, I guess. After reading it, one feels both emotionally and physically satiated.
I think my only complaint is some of the scenes regarding Cindy's girlfriends near the end seem repetitive, and as I was reading it I had to skip them to keep my self interested. I would suggest more mutilations, and more scat. Maybe something involving boiling water and eating one's own flesh. (10/10)
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Excellent story with a high level of inventiveness.
JJ (9/10)
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theroadtoad
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May 16, 2008 |
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great story! I really enjoyed it. I hope Pamela will write more along the same theme. (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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An excellent story which covers humiliation - a very hard topic to get right - exceptionally well. I have not yet read the whole story (it's damn long!) but am looking forward to it, and am reviewing it to remind myself to finish it. I will make this review more detailed when I'm done. (9/10)
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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Powerful story, rich and well told. (10/10)
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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really great!!! (9/10)
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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A wild, wild romp. Great fun. (10/10)
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Feb 25, 2005 |
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Amazing. It's taken me days to finish reading this peice, and all I can think is wow. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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long, but nothing less the outstanding, great story (10/10)
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Sep 26, 2003 |
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I've read it a lot of times and it is marvellous.
Really good job. (10/10)
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djc_sd
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May 25, 2003 |
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Enjoyed feeling the young girl's frustration and feeling of lost hopelessness as she is pulled down at amlost every turn.
As with most readers I too have my favorite avenues which I would have liked seen developed like growing exposure in classes and at school to Cindy as well as physical torments in public but enjoyed the story as is. (8/10)
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rcb
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Feb 28, 2003 |
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Pamela is indeed one of our premier authors -- keep it up please (9/10)
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Hedonist
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Dec 25, 2002 |
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Pamela may now be my favorite e-author. This story was well written and flowed well. I would have liked to seen a few other changes, but I didn't write it :) First, I would have liked to see more mother/daughter development both sexual and characterization between Jenna and Rhonda. Also, Chet starts off really nice and get mean real quick. If he were nicer to Cindy, I could see her falling for him in a slave/master way. Again Very well written, I can't wait for more stories from Pamela! (9/10)
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Terry Gabriola
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Nov 26, 2002 |
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Undoubtedly one of the better-written tales I've come across recently; keep it up. But the whole thing rather falls apart on the believability front for me - yes, obviously I expect to suspend my disbelief a lot in these tales, but you can often soften the blow by taking longer to build the scenario up. (7/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Nov 24, 2002 |
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As Dave said the writing of this story is just brilliant. No one creates a mood of dominance/helplessness better than Pamela.<br>I do have a couple of little quibbles that keep me from giving this remarkable story a 10. First, the premise (i.e. the father's character) is difficult to swallow. Second, the young boyfriend changes from a very nice guy to a monster rather precipitously. And third, I think the author should have checked the Extreme story code; at least one incident was very tough sledding for me.<br>But those are relatively minor flaws in a very, very fine and stimulating story. And I would add this comment as well - I have not encountered an author (of stories in my sphere of interest) whose body of work is at such a consistently high level. This author is remarkably talented and apparently quite prolific as well. (9/10)
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DaveH
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Nov 21, 2002 |
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Of the thousands of stories I have read in my lifetime, this one has to come close to being an all time classic. Superbly written characters, exceptionally realistic dialogue and reactions, and a fabulous plot. I have never seen the subject of humiliation being examined so deliciously as in this remarkable story. My sincere thanks and congratulations to a remarkable author! (10/10)
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