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Laura
Author: Anchor
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(Added on Jun 13, 2002)
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After communicating with her master on the internet, she decided to accept the invitation of her master and receive some real discipline. |
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| Reviewer:
truckinnhorsin
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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It seems you have potential, but i am guessing english isnt your first language, i suggest either sticking to what you usually speak (im guessing french?) or else, find a good editor to help you through the transition. (3/10)
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mkemse
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May 1, 2004 |
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a very generous rating, to many story like this already posted (3/10)
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hyphen666
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Jun 17, 2002 |
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I wonder what the author was going while english and spelling were being taught? Where do I begin? On second thought, why bother. All I can say is that this type of gibberish can be hazardous to your mental health; read at your own risk! (2/10)
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