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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Enteme
(Edit) |
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Jan 14, 2016 |
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So hope there's a part 2.
I could feel for her, is so erotic. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
gilgamekk
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Sep 29, 2012 |
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It was a good start, and an interesting scenario. I'd like to see more of her reaction, and also I'm curious: she's known him well for a long time, does she start to realize that she needs to think differently about some things that happened in the past? (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
littleone__
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Sep 25, 2012 |
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It was worth reading. The only reason I didn't give it 9 or 10 was because it was only one chapter. When the author puts some more meet on the bone I it could be a 10. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Sep 24, 2012 |
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Not a bad start, even if it was a bit short and a few errors were spotted. I'd like a little more background and detail, and a little more emotion would be great, but I'll be looking for the next chapter and we will see where it goes from there. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
AniYasha
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Sep 17, 2012 |
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Though short, on the whole it shows promise. The reluctance of the submissive is so far realistic without being overly dramatic. I am looking forwards to more. (8/10)
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