Thanks Geasa,
It is long enough and is also very good!
You managed to not only give me a small insight into both characters but also created an interest in what is going to happen that night!
Okay, I am not sure how long I will be here in level one ( as one of the previous level one instructors has offered to come back), but since it is still me instructing here is your next assignment.
You are to plan a story - you will need to set it out as listed below.
Setting
Characters
Time ( year, day, month, season etc)
Problem ( could be more than one, but it is good to start with just one clear problem)
Solution - think of a few ways you might solve the problem.
conclusion
any extra information you think could be necessary before you begin to write your story.
Please ask if you need any help.