CathySt11
Registered User

could you meet me in the chat room
master_jerry

was great to talk with you..I hope to hear from you soon.be safe until another time

Lovely album of pictures, darling.

Yep. Saw and read it. And reviewed it too, but the review is gone as the server went belly-up again and everything was set back to June of this year... But, since the same thing happened in December 2009 (set back to early March 2009; me losing around 500 reviews in the process) I made back-ups of my reviews... Am waiting til all the stories are up to add my comments again.

I felt "The Beginning Of My Last Thoughts" had a far more serious tone than "My Last Thoughts", with a kick-off where it seems you want to tell too many things in too short a space, giving a sense of unbalancedness and a rushed feel. I rated it a seven, for the time being, as I'm sure that things will become more 'setttled' and clearer as content is added, so, the 'score' will presumably go up. At least, that's how I forsee things, based on the pretty decent writing and storytelling...

JJ

cant wait to talk again hurry back sweety

You're welcome, Cathy. Never mind the tongue-in-cheekness in some of my reviews, they're (usually) not ill-intended. Like I said, I found your writing to be above par, which makes you 'something' to cherish, as you as of now belong to that minority of good writers.

Just don't pay attention at the growing sea of fans flocking beneath your window, screaming for an encore. Let it flow in your own rhythm.

JJ

I hope we didn't push you too hard today...thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!

Hi! Welcome to this site! Enjoy all and feel invited to ue all opportunities here. Hope to see you soon in chat