notes to my writings

I got some feedback from my story darft "a beast at heart", and even though she pointed out to me many things that i did in the story that was very clearless. I fell very good about the points made. The things that were pointed out were things such as details within the story and to write about real people. These points, and afew other points that i cant recall right, am very thankful for, are things that if i work on I can improve on. Besides, i dont intend to make it rich writing i just want to write enjoyable stories.

P.S. Thanks Pearlgem